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Thread: Critique My Lead In & My Sales Ad - PLEASE!

  1. 11-16-2005, 08:21 AM #1
    haybobby
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    Critique My Lead In & My Sales Ad - PLEASE!

    Hello, I know nothing about advertising and I would sincerely appreciate the help of those much more knowledgeable-- Please take a look at my site and give me your honest opinion on how I would improve it to get more sales thank you for your time.
    http://cgi.ebay.com/ws/eBayISAPI.dll...tem=4419239580
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  2. 11-18-2005, 01:54 AM #2
    talnus
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    Well you got me to buy a pound. Hope it's as good as you say it is.

    Great layout. Is that story really true? One suggestion - not so many colors in the text near the bottom.

    Looking forward to some jerky!
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  3. 11-18-2005, 02:48 AM #3
    cubeshark
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    Simple design, which is good. But I recommend not centering the text for the Description and also, I would change the light aqua blue text color to a darker shade because eye strain.

    You may also want to reduce the width of the actual text for easier legibility. Long sentences tend to "turn off" readers.

    Good Luck!
    Ritchie

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