Hello fellow business people. I am in need of you small business owners (and anyone else at all) to look over my site and tell me where I am going wrong as far as content.

I am receiving feedback that the site is too corporate looking and does nothing to keep the potential customers interest. Well, since the small business crowd is the target audience, I thought I would ask here for input on what would make the site more interesting and consumer oriented.

I'll give you some information first. I am a business formation service specializing in incorporating small businesses, forming LLCs, trusts, etc. So in essence, I need to interest people just like you guys. Go to www.nev-corp.com...

So, What would you want to see if you were browsign my site? Any input at all is welcome. But, please do not try to sell me any silly web marketing tools. I have seen enough of these. I just want your basic opinions...What would keep your iterest?

Thanks a bunch!
Nicole
Why incorporate in Nevada?