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please check if it's good
hi I am working LocoNav site's following page
https://loconav.com/telematics
it will be good if you can review its on-page efforts.
Thank you
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Hi,
The structure is straight forward in a good way, but I think your message needs to be more clear in the hero section. I would recommend moving the paragraph under "Serving Customers Across All Industries" up to the hero section or writing something similar up there, as well as having a bold styling and bigger font size for the H1:s. The overall design is ok, but a bit generic in my opinion so a different headline font and body font could spice that up a little.
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Its awesome, however there is still room for improvement
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Originally Posted by zoto_solutions
Its awesome, however there is still room for improvement
thanks for the reply, it would be nice if you can suggest those improvements.
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Originally Posted by Dreamify
Hi,
The structure is straight forward in a good way, but I think your message needs to be more clear in the hero section. I would recommend moving the paragraph under "Serving Customers Across All Industries" up to the hero section or writing something similar up there, as well as having a bold styling and bigger font size for the H1:s. The overall design is ok, but a bit generic in my opinion so a different headline font and body font could spice that up a little.
your suggestions are really helpful, will try to implement those and will let you know here what will be results.
Thanks for you time
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Your website is very well constructed however when i searched for it on google it was on one of the lower pages. This was one of my issues until i was contacted by SEOBlaze. They brought my website to the first page, i saw that i gaining a lot more clients then before.
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Never Beat around the bush when asking someone to do something for you, check verb to make certain that something some one is the correct. customer stopped us and checked.
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the Contact Form should be visible on first scroll for better lead generation.
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Nice
It's quite good, but I can't find it in google so you should optimize your SEO.
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first of all, there is a missing slider on your website which seems is empty. make the design is a bit flexible so that the visitors stay on your website.
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Hi! Looks good, but I don't like when links in the menu open in a new tab.
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