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  1. #1
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    please check if it's good

    hi I am working LocoNav site's following page

    https://loconav.com/telematics

    it will be good if you can review its on-page efforts.

    Thank you

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    Hi,

    The structure is straight forward in a good way, but I think your message needs to be more clear in the hero section. I would recommend moving the paragraph under "Serving Customers Across All Industries" up to the hero section or writing something similar up there, as well as having a bold styling and bigger font size for the H1:s. The overall design is ok, but a bit generic in my opinion so a different headline font and body font could spice that up a little.

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    Its awesome, however there is still room for improvement

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    Quote Originally Posted by zoto_solutions View Post
    Its awesome, however there is still room for improvement
    thanks for the reply, it would be nice if you can suggest those improvements.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dreamify View Post
    Hi,

    The structure is straight forward in a good way, but I think your message needs to be more clear in the hero section. I would recommend moving the paragraph under "Serving Customers Across All Industries" up to the hero section or writing something similar up there, as well as having a bold styling and bigger font size for the H1:s. The overall design is ok, but a bit generic in my opinion so a different headline font and body font could spice that up a little.
    your suggestions are really helpful, will try to implement those and will let you know here what will be results.

    Thanks for you time

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    Your website is very well constructed however when i searched for it on google it was on one of the lower pages. This was one of my issues until i was contacted by SEOBlaze. They brought my website to the first page, i saw that i gaining a lot more clients then before.

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