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flirteeg
12-11-2005, 03:17 AM
Hi,
I am new to the forum. I am flirteeg and I own an online boutique for female flirty tees, apparel, and accessories. I developed a website for the Holiday Season to hopefully appeal to more to my market. However, I am not receiving much traffic, let alone sales. I am a fairly new business so my inventory is not plentiful but I think I have some great t-shirt designs to get started. I design them myself. Of course, I cater to the young teen to young adult market so I have been researching how to appeal to this market. Please rate my site and can anyone offer advice on making my site more Teen-friendly. The store is called Flirtee Girl located at www.flirteegirl.com. Thanks for your input!

Say It with a Tee!
www.flirteegirl.com

dcomiskey
12-13-2005, 01:04 PM
The graphics look sgreat, but the layout is....annoying. I don't understand why you would have such a narrow column in the middle. All your relevant sales content falls way down the page this way. Also, your product picture are atrocious. You need to take new ones or get the original graphics from your supplier. It looks like you tried to overcompress them to make them small. But, small graphics are going to be small in size anyway. The quality of the images contrasts to the smooth, classy graphics you have for the site.

Make the shirt images clickable on the home page. Not just text links below them.

Also, the text about your contest (which is wayyyy down at the bottom and will never be seen) is in a horrible blue color which clashes with the pink background. I would change your home page text to a much lighter shade of pink, like you have at the very bottom of the home page.

Finally, the layout of the rest of your pages doesn't jive with your home page. Your logo seems to be stretched out and misplaced. You also have a ton of useless white space. You need to have the same design throughout the store.

Otherwise, the site looks promising. You just need a lot more products and have to get on the marketing train.